Kwing's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pico Fighter!]

Weird

I liked it. The movement was, at times, hard to control, and the fighting itself was a little stupid, but overall it was a pretty good game. However, you never have to lose any health if you rapidly move back and forth so that the UberKids have no chance to punch you before you run away. I beat it with a score of 1696.

[Rule The World]

Too Short

As orangishred has stated, it was a strategy game without strategy. Though I helped much with the presentation and made it look decent, that wasn't enough to completely save it. The concept, though good, was still pretty flawed at times, such as being able to use combinations that made it a fool-proof way to win and so on. Overall, good effort, but it wasn't enough.

[Smidge]

Perfect

I would like to add on to what FazzleMan was saying. It was a really fun project to do, mainly because of the fact we were creating a game for such a lighthearted, harmless little critter, unlike earlier projects such as Squatty. I feel the presentation and some of the graphics could have been a hair better, but for the most part, it was good. Another problem was that at the end, if you get squished between the ground and the moving platform, you are ejected from the entire game area. Other than that, great job!

[Have Fun And Be Stupid]

Awesome!

Beat it in 8 seconds.

Some things were annoying, though.
-One was the selectable text that was very much obstructive at points in the game
-It was too short
-The presentation wasn't too good; perhaps you could have added more colors, better graphics, etc.
-The maze had no anti-cheats

[Mouse Effects 4]

WHOA!!!

The graphics are stunning, and the framerate, animation, and smoothness are great, too. Good presentation, good layout. The only thing that might be cool would be installing features where you would have to complete certain objectives (avoid, batter, touch, or a combination of the above) using the things spawning from and around your mouse. This is godly.

[Dodge the Lines!]

HARD!

Simple, but really fun and hard! I couldn't get much past 200, but it's really addictive! The scripting is good, the objective of the star is pretty fun, and overall a really great game!!

[Mario-Combat]

WHOA!

This is... INSANE! It's a bit short, but it's very fun. There should have been things to pick up, and more enemies, because it was too easy until you got to the boss. Still, Bowser was an extremely fun boss fight!

[Yoshiboshi's Epic Remade]

WHAT?

This is almost a complete copy of the first one! You added nothing except music, which sucked (players can find their own music, at least make a mute button using on(release){;stopAllSound();} on a button!)

The buttons were fixed, but you seemed to have changed nothing. If you want, use the edit button above the Author Comments section if you wish to update a game.

I don't mean to cut my review short, but I've already reviewed the other one. Check out that one for additional details that are true for both of the game versions.

Yoshiboshi3 responds:

Why dont you like the music? Its Pwnage.

[Yoshiboshi3's Epic Quest!]

Horrible!

This is just horrible!

The graphics are bad; you just imported pictures! If you're going to do that, at LEAST trace it (Modify>Bitmap>Trace Bitmap)

The gameplay was awful. It took me a while to figure out that you had to use the arrow keys, and those were pretty pointless, as you just touched something. The baseball bats were avoidable because you could move off of the screen. (Add if(this._x<0){;this._x=0;}; and similar)

The style was bad. You could have done a lot to improve the presentation. The graphics that were hand-drawn sucked. (If you're using Flash 8 or higher, you can select any typed text and go to Properties>Filters>Bevel, Glow, Drop Shadow, etc.) Putting in Moovlin was a huge mistake. That offended me that you would put such a highly hailed pioneer of PSP Flash Gaming into such a primitive, non-PSP-compatible game. You could have waited until you were a better artist to acknowledge him.

Violence was practically nonexistant, even if it was supposed to be.

The only humor was how bad it was. I don't want to offend you, but it seemed almost as if you were trying to make it bad.

Additionally, the action was horrible. The shooting sequences should have included moving targets, etc. (Use button script for Movie Clips containing animations in them, at LEAST.)

Overall, very poor. The background, players, layout, style, graphics, and everything else were pretty bad.

If you seriously want to improve with Flash, you may PM me and I will send you several links to good ActionScript sources and explain what I can for you. (But please try not to persistently nag me about things.)

Hope I helped.
~Kwing

Yoshiboshi3 responds:

Thank you for a constructive review! Check out my updated version.