Kwing's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[NGHH'11 - Ockeroid vs Moniker]

Ockeroid V1 - Sell it at a discount is decent. Flow is almost teasing like a kid on a playground, you could stand to be a little more venomous to compensate if this is your natural voice.

Moniker V1 - In it for the whole damn dash is a nice flip but overall the verse isn't aggressive enough.

Ockeroid V2 - What are you respected for? Nice diss, but weak rhyme. Swagger is an okay flip, very nice finisher.

Moniker V2 - Long E makes very weak rhymes, stick to Flash is okay. Overall the personals just aren't very strong attacks.

[NGHH KO3 - Gloine vs GasMasq]

First off nice beat. Somber and serious.

Gloine V1 - Name diss, awesome flow and rhyme scheme, last several bars get progressively weaker though.

Gasmasq V1 - Acid/basic is clever, fakeness diss is good too but like Gloine's verse degenerates into filler. So far both verses have had great delivery though.

Gloine V2 - Nice opener with 'up to bar'. Acid/base flip is nice, I also like the doubletime followed by the 'try to rap fast' line. The doubletime was somewhat hard to understand but I got it much faster than I did with Gas' battle against Vox.

Gasmasq V2 - On beat line is weak since Gloine is actually on beat. Flash cartoons is a decent personal, general theme of toxic chemicals remains consistent throughout the whole battle.

Very, very close battle. I feel like Gas played it safe in his second verse which is what gives Gloine the win in my opinion.

[NGHH KO2 - 8track vs Exceptid]

8track V1 - Lacking a bit of clarity. "Dirty little" wordplay is mediocre and repetitive.

Exceptid V1 - Four tracks diss, Pokemon diss, age diss is strong, couldn't get signed is another nice punch.

8track V2 - Accepted/Exceptid is nice wordplay, Dr. Seuss could be a nice diss if you pointed out one particular line you wanted to flip. Audio mixing diss is clever and unexpected, profanity is another decent flip, points for effort.

Exceptid V2 - "Don't flip me" is kind of lame. Re-flips quality and accepted lines, MySpace line should have been more specific. Voice acting flip at the end is badass.

Exceptid wins easily with vicious delivery and personals.

[NGHH KO1 - wasim vs SteveGuzzi]

wasim - Mumbles a bunch of nonsense (never ever ever)? Flow is sporadic, can't pronounce 'think'. Nobody was born to rap but this guy wasn't born to spit.

Steve - Mean delivery and rhymes, has a few light personals addressing wasim's bars. Overall his general confidence wins the battle.

[NGHH KO1 - Exceptid vs Vasheli]

Exceptid comes with a lot of presence. I don't know anything about Vashelite so I can't say how many disses are personals. Also Exceptid is a tad overproduced with all the doubles and shit.

Still he shows a lot of charisma, I have no regrets that he advanced. Beat is also dope as fuck.

[NGHH KO1 - Broken Vs Gasmsq]

Broken V1 - Is the children line a personal about Gas getting his girl pregnant? Only real personal I heard, and the verse was really fucking short.

Gasmasq V1 - Brooklyn diss, decent internal rhymes, atom and star make a weak finisher.

Broken V2 - Horribly off-beat filler. Verse is also amazingly short.

Gas wins but for the wrong reasons.

[NGHH KO1 - Theicon Vs Redmong]

ICON V1 - Not many punches at all, then a little filler.

RedMongoose V1 - What, why is he singing...? Where are the punches? Fire in your eyes line makes no sense.

ICON V2 - Still filler but actually attacks unlike Mongoose.

ICON for the advance.

[NGHH KO1 - Retvox Vs Rednwhi]

Vox V1 - You don't even have filler. Dude, throw a punch. And stop whispering.

RednWhite V1 - N-bombs is a nice diss, interesting rhyme scheme but falls off beat a little, falls off topic too.

Vox V2 - All name disses...

There are so few personals it's basically the n-bomb line vs the name diss. I'd give this to RednWhite since he might have showed more promise in a second verse.

[NGHH KO1 - R-Aveng vs Denverbr]

Rav V1 - So many gay disses plus a mom line? Flow is on point but lacking in content. 'Onto the next one' is an okay finisher but kind of awkward for a battle.

Denver V1 - Tampon line? How original. Pottery class is a dope metaphor. Flow is awkward at times, still lots of filler. And this verse was longer...?

Rav V2 - 50 hours is a nice diss, didn't really understand the rest of the verse.

Generic battle but Rav throws the knockout punch in his second verse and has better flow.

[Gasmasq vs. Rav]

Gasmasq - Most lines seem to be aimed at Rav being an internet rapper. Brief mention about LARPing, then more internet stuff with Twitter. Finisher is pretty good.

Rav - N-bombs is a nice diss, LARPing diss, philosopher diss, addresses Emergency battle, brings up Hazardous Materials but doesn't make a strong punch out of it, art diss, thug/nerd diss, brings up the mayor recording, finisher is an appropriate response to Gas'.

I really have no idea who Rav is. If I had to battle him, I'd have no dirt against him, and I can tell that this is something Gas is struggling with. He tries to incorporate personals but can't. Rav on the other hand has no shortage of ammunition, although most of his personals come from things you'd find just from checking his profile page. Even so, Rav throws more punches and edges the battle.

I'd really like to see how this would have turned out if Gas had a second verse. Also the beat makes it a bit hard to hear the rappers since it's so damned loud. Still a good listen to.