Kwing's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[NGHH'11 - n1k-mug vs suddle]

Damn, this is one hell of a first round. Alright, let's break it down.

n1k V1 - Good delivery for poor lines. You even made up a personal and then said it was fiction. Damn, can't you find any personals? You used a name diss in the second verse, you could have easily switched it over to the first one.

Suddle V1 - Rapping fast diss, voice diss, beat making. Three REALLY good personals. n1k is already on the ropes after this.

n1k V2 - Lullaby/name diss are okay, decent way to begin the verse. A bit more filler and this time your doubletime is actually worse, which only makes Suddle's first verse hurt worse. Girl flip is done the right way - I like the Darth Vader follow up.

Suddle V2 - Immediate player flip, recycle flip is okay but I've heard worse MCs on the site. Waffle iron is a nice finisher.

Suddle annihilates n1k with personals but in most other brackets n1k would have made it to the second round.

[NGHH'11 - Ockeroid vs Moniker]

Ockeroid V1 - Sell it at a discount is decent. Flow is almost teasing like a kid on a playground, you could stand to be a little more venomous to compensate if this is your natural voice.

Moniker V1 - In it for the whole damn dash is a nice flip but overall the verse isn't aggressive enough.

Ockeroid V2 - What are you respected for? Nice diss, but weak rhyme. Swagger is an okay flip, very nice finisher.

Moniker V2 - Long E makes very weak rhymes, stick to Flash is okay. Overall the personals just aren't very strong attacks.

[NGHH KO3 - Gloine vs GasMasq]

First off nice beat. Somber and serious.

Gloine V1 - Name diss, awesome flow and rhyme scheme, last several bars get progressively weaker though.

Gasmasq V1 - Acid/basic is clever, fakeness diss is good too but like Gloine's verse degenerates into filler. So far both verses have had great delivery though.

Gloine V2 - Nice opener with 'up to bar'. Acid/base flip is nice, I also like the doubletime followed by the 'try to rap fast' line. The doubletime was somewhat hard to understand but I got it much faster than I did with Gas' battle against Vox.

Gasmasq V2 - On beat line is weak since Gloine is actually on beat. Flash cartoons is a decent personal, general theme of toxic chemicals remains consistent throughout the whole battle.

Very, very close battle. I feel like Gas played it safe in his second verse which is what gives Gloine the win in my opinion.

[NGHH KO2 - 8track vs Exceptid]

8track V1 - Lacking a bit of clarity. "Dirty little" wordplay is mediocre and repetitive.

Exceptid V1 - Four tracks diss, Pokemon diss, age diss is strong, couldn't get signed is another nice punch.

8track V2 - Accepted/Exceptid is nice wordplay, Dr. Seuss could be a nice diss if you pointed out one particular line you wanted to flip. Audio mixing diss is clever and unexpected, profanity is another decent flip, points for effort.

Exceptid V2 - "Don't flip me" is kind of lame. Re-flips quality and accepted lines, MySpace line should have been more specific. Voice acting flip at the end is badass.

Exceptid wins easily with vicious delivery and personals.

[NGHH KO1 - wasim vs SteveGuzzi]

wasim - Mumbles a bunch of nonsense (never ever ever)? Flow is sporadic, can't pronounce 'think'. Nobody was born to rap but this guy wasn't born to spit.

Steve - Mean delivery and rhymes, has a few light personals addressing wasim's bars. Overall his general confidence wins the battle.

[NGHH KO1 - Exceptid vs Vasheli]

Exceptid comes with a lot of presence. I don't know anything about Vashelite so I can't say how many disses are personals. Also Exceptid is a tad overproduced with all the doubles and shit.

Still he shows a lot of charisma, I have no regrets that he advanced. Beat is also dope as fuck.

[NGHH KO1 - Broken Vs Gasmsq]

Broken V1 - Is the children line a personal about Gas getting his girl pregnant? Only real personal I heard, and the verse was really fucking short.

Gasmasq V1 - Brooklyn diss, decent internal rhymes, atom and star make a weak finisher.

Broken V2 - Horribly off-beat filler. Verse is also amazingly short.

Gas wins but for the wrong reasons.

[NGHH KO1 - Theicon Vs Redmong]

ICON V1 - Not many punches at all, then a little filler.

RedMongoose V1 - What, why is he singing...? Where are the punches? Fire in your eyes line makes no sense.

ICON V2 - Still filler but actually attacks unlike Mongoose.

ICON for the advance.

[NGHH KO1 - Retvox Vs Rednwhi]

Vox V1 - You don't even have filler. Dude, throw a punch. And stop whispering.

RednWhite V1 - N-bombs is a nice diss, interesting rhyme scheme but falls off beat a little, falls off topic too.

Vox V2 - All name disses...

There are so few personals it's basically the n-bomb line vs the name diss. I'd give this to RednWhite since he might have showed more promise in a second verse.

[NGHH KO1 - R-Aveng vs Denverbr]

Rav V1 - So many gay disses plus a mom line? Flow is on point but lacking in content. 'Onto the next one' is an okay finisher but kind of awkward for a battle.

Denver V1 - Tampon line? How original. Pottery class is a dope metaphor. Flow is awkward at times, still lots of filler. And this verse was longer...?

Rav V2 - 50 hours is a nice diss, didn't really understand the rest of the verse.

Generic battle but Rav throws the knockout punch in his second verse and has better flow.