This was okay. I liked the writing and the scenarios were funny, but the control scheme annoyed the hell out of me. I found myself constantly mashing X because of how slow the text displayed, and more than once I accidentally picked the wrong option because the highlighted option looped around back to the top.
Other than that, the main weakness here was that the game is short and there are so few options to explore here. It feels very obviously like reading branches of a story rather than actively participating in an adventure, as is the case in games like YFYIAR.