Kwing's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[[H] - Blessed W/O Ft.]

"Mine was three weeks in, so you actually lacked to give a factual reason."

AHAHAHAHA!!

Oh man, I really don't want to slam on you but it's damn hard not to. Decent track I suppose, one big problem is that your rhyme scheme is a little simple. You use a lot more internal rhymes and not very many multis (you use your rhyme scheme to spell out your death rattle, AAAAAAAA!!). A few lines are kind of iffy, like the knock you out your clothes line. What is this, Battle Raper?

Last thing I'll touch on is flow. Not to be a hypocrite here, but your delivery is pretty flat. Your voice doesn't need to be that deep, so if you spoke more naturally I imagine you'd have a bit more resonance.

Also, you reused the struggle/buckle rhyme in Chaotic.

Dope beat though.

[FF | Abyssal]

Percussion is a little repetitive but I love the melody. Very chill. Lots of layers to add complexity as well, which is a major plus. I like that the sampling is done very sparingly.

[Kill Bill v Senator Dean]

KillBill - '25 dollars in the battle' is funny as hell. 'Bargain me off' is probably more accurate than I think it is. 'Never shown your face' is okay. 'Yeah I guess you're funny' is great, 'you're a black dude, we get the point' is solid, Paypal line is a great finisher, shows that he doesn't even really care about the battle.

Senator - 'Fuck cops' is good, Occupy Wall Street was a little beside the point. Picture flip is okay. 'Disaster relief' is kind of a continuation of the OWS thing, politics are way off-topic. 'All about appearance' is good, finisher could have been decent but 'methinks no' is a really awkward cringy line.

KillBill stayed on topic and on point. Giving him the win.

[Yun - Dig It]

A little too simple for its own good. Maybe throw in a bassline or at least some kind of a melody. As it is it sounds kind of generic.

[HDC: WarSpawn vs. Wolfie]

WarSpawn V1 - MickeyMao diss is funny and strong. Twitter diss is funnier.

Wolfie V1 - Twitter flip is decent, John Dean diss is decent. Too many words in a line. N-word flip is decent.

WarSpawn V2 - John flip is decent, Twitter diss is nice. Credibility flip is alright. Name diss is alright.

Wolfie V2 - Beat diss is funny, it was bound to come sometime. ClabTrap and HDC disses are solid, F-word diss is decent.

I was expecting War to tear Wolfie apart but when it comes down to it Wolfie threw more punches and War just didn't match them. Close battle, I think War might have been able to win but not this time.

Ironically the beat is better than any of the four verses in the battle.

[Yun+WS - Intro]

Whoa. Nice as fuck. Relentless imagery, rhymes are sometimes hit and miss and flow wavers at times but all in all the little mistakes give it a very raw sound to it that I've come to expect from WS. Yun makes an awesome beat too.

[CLAB - Joey vs Gasmasq]

JoeyKeys V1 - People have been using name disses against Gasmasq for years now, it's really not clever anymore. Lost to Rav and MadFlex is decent, mayor diss is funny, album diss is much heavier. Drawings diss is decent, philosopher diss is okay.

Gasmasq V1 - Opticals flip is consistent with Keys' finisher. Didn't win until afterward is good, broken flow flip is alright, didn't save you an album / domain flip is awesome. Jaw's wired shut is strong, PiGPEN flip is awesome. Producer diss is decent but a little off-beat.

JoeyKeys V2 - Flow gets worse since last time. Google diss is decent. Same flow since 2005 is okay. Doubletime is bad.

Gasmasq V2 - Interruption line is solid, doubletime flip. Google flip is solid, compliment for both verses is nice. Last several bars are mediocre.

Both of the first verses are the best in the battle. Joey uses a lot of punches but doesn't put enough sting into them. Gasmasq matches the punches with flips of equal quantity and greater quality. Joey doesn't respond with enough flips and even Gas' mediocre second verse is enough to give him the win.

[CLAB- PsioNic vs JoeyKeys]

PsioNic V1 - Drug diss is pretty much the only personal here but you have some really clever and unusual rhymes.

JoeyKeys V1 - Better flow is immediately apparent. "Nothing to say to me" is tight. A little overproduced, made it a bit tougher to understand. Monotone diss is okay. Lines like the one about 'how many takes' were delivered with aggression and worked out well, hanging flip is a nice finisher.

PsioNic V2 - Flow seems a little weaker. Emotion line is a little rich considering Joey (rightfully) called you monotone.

JoeyKeys V2 - Really hard to understand and a lot of filler. 0 Kelvin line is tight, toast to Joey Keys is a strong finisher.

Overall both emcees could have come a lot harder but PsioNic owned with his rhymes and Joey really brought it with his delivery. I'd give it to Joey by a small margin, would have been nice if there had been even one knockout punch.

[NGHH - McFist vs Boss]

McFist V1 - Random lame lines, sporadic flow, weak name diss, and JK? Come on. Calling yourself unreliable, fancy feast and acronyms, what the fuck?

Boss V1 - Irrelevant nonsense is strong, flow is much more aggressive. Fisting line is uninspired but made me laugh more than it should have. A little off-beat at the end.

McFist V2 - The trying too hard line was instantly brought down by bad off-beat doubletime just like Boss'. The mom lines were TERRIBLE. Flow is actually worse than the first time.

Boss V2 - Forced as hell, monotone, have no dick is lame but funny delivered. Acid flip is solid. Ralph Nader finisher is filler but funny.

Boss has better lyrics and also brings enough energy to earn him the win. McFist is wack.

[CLAB - Gasmasq vs FatBeat]

Gasmasq V1 - Flash diss, mic clarity diss, jokes have no punchline, hype on Valentine's is funny, stick Flashes is a little redundant. Overall Gas throws a handful of punches but it's more of a list than an attack pattern. Fewer hits would have been necessary if they had been a little more clever or biting. Valentine's day line is good though.

FatBeats V1 - Philosophical hipster douchebag, mayor diss, Spokane line is mediocre, foam sword is decent but LARPing disses are kind of old now, chilling with girl is an awesome flip. Hobby rapper is nice, finisher is weak.

Gasmasq V2 - Dragon flip is okay, hobby flip is stronger, Flash diss is horribly redundant. Chick's apartment for three days is a nice flip with an even better follower. "Retire you entirely" is fucking brilliant. Kind of the opposite of his first verse - very few punches but they're much, much stronger.

FatBeats V2 - Same flow/syllable disses are kind of ironic since you're drunk and slurring even worse than you usually do. Speakers nearly blew is a little confusing since I don't hear any problem with Gas' verse, plus you're actually popping. SoundCloud diss is solid and funny. Smorg diss is funny, deicide finisher is clever and appropriate.

Tight battle, very close. Overall I think Gas' attacks were more varied, having quantity in the first verse and quality in the second. Both threw a lot of light personals but I feel like Fat's most damaging diss was the SoundCloud line, which pales in comparison to the punches in Gas' second verse. Gasmasq for the advance.