Carefoot V1 - Doesn't enunciate, doesn't make it clear where one bar ends and the next one begins.
Gasmasq V1 - Nice flow and punchlines but not many personals, reminds me a lot of the Smorg battle.
Carefoot V2 - Open mic diss is actually decent. MadFlex diss sucks because of how much you fail at flowing.
Gasmasq V2 - Women flip is okay, MySpace diss is hilarious but this is a 2012 battle, right? Lol. Finals flip is strong, finisher is strong as well.
Gas for the win, easily.
Seems kind of emotionless to me, honestly. The drums are too abrasive for a somber beat, but the melody is too somber for something more aggressive. This beat gets stuck somewhere in the middle and I don't like it. You could have put in some bass for more of that aggression or toned the entire thing down and used a lot of fading and ambiance for something gentler.
TK V1 - Goofy and smooth at the same time, brilliant rhymes and awesome flow. Neanderthal line is kind of hammy. Trying too hard is a decent personal. Razor finisher is amusing.
EQ V1 - Cut yourself flip is amusing. dictionary.com line is solid but TK's rhymes really weren't overkill or fanciful, they flowed. B-hole made me roll my eyes. Emo bangs is a decent flip. Gay bar is lame, anime diss is better. Finisher went over my head.
TK V2 - Opening with stuff about your bars is great. People showed up at mine is great, sex life is nice, equalization is another strong one. Coffee flip is unnecessary, should have used a punch line instead.
EQ V2 - Biting line is a good way to attack TK changing his voice. Geico line is a little cheesy. More emo stuff, okay. Pasty diss is amusing, coffee finisher is amusing.
This is a really tough battle to judge. There are a lot of punches but a lot of them fail to hit. TK flips like mad in his second verse but EQ is more consistent with flipping but TK went first, so I'm having some trouble picking out a winner. Another issue is that EQ leans pretty heavily on flips - the personals he threw were good but few in number, which leads me to believe the battle might have swung more heavily in TK's favor if he'd gone second. I would have to give it to TK by a tiny margin, partly because he had a more natural flow and partially because he didn't double himself into oblivion.
Far too much sampling with the voices, Promise Reprise is a little too redundant and overall it damages the track a lot. The pounding percussion 2/3 of the way in salvaged what had previously sounded quite lazy, however even then it's quite simplistic.
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Nimbus - Wouldn't have gotten the song references if I hadn't seen the quotes in the lyrics. Wasted a lot of bars talking about semen, it's a major minus. Second verse has the flips but they don't sting. Overall his verses seem more like a research paper than a battle.
Mao - The clitoris line is a real eye-roller, the advantage you have over Nimbus is that you didn't stay on that topic for as long as he did. "Copyright infringement" was good but I feel like I could have made it a little meaner. Crucifixion and clergy lines were boring, I might have tried to tear up the semen lines (your bars are sterile, mine are fresh, etc etc) Second verse is similar with some alright personals and a little bit of filler.
I really wasn't feeling any strong hits either way. That being said, I feel like MadFlex had a point that Nimbus just wasn't aggressive enough. Mao wasn't exactly going ham either, but he was a bit more direct and to-the-point, even though his flow suffered a little bit. Neither came with very strong rhymes or any multies, which is a gigantic minus for both of you. Mao for the win but I think both of you were lazy as hell.
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MC BoB needs to mix his vocals louder, I would have even taken popping and clipping over a muffled sound if it meant I could understand what he was saying. His flow in the second verse was somewhat off-beat and generic. Grenades, penises, butts, and a 'fuck you.' Yeah, okay...
Bummer for the win. How did BoB even get BCT in the ring?
A little too much distortion on the guitar and a few bits seemed really repetitive (several times I was tempted to chant 'black and yellow black and yellow' along with the guitar). This reminded me a lot of Episode 666 by In Flames, though you have a lot less progression and overall musical prowess here to be honest.
Far from bad, but this track hits my ears like flat soda.
Whoa, top quality beat right here. Percussion sounds really raw and tribal. Melody is not nearly as repetitive as 90% of the beats on this site, which is another gigantic plus. This has a bit of a video game feel to it on top of the hip-hop thing, which isn't a bad thing at all. Reminds me a lot of a game called Crypt Raider.
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