SWEET!
I was starting to get OCD about everything getting wiped off the screen... LOL you might have guessed that meant the end was satisfying. As soon as I saw the words RingFinger, I knew it was going to be good!
SWEET!
I was starting to get OCD about everything getting wiped off the screen... LOL you might have guessed that meant the end was satisfying. As soon as I saw the words RingFinger, I knew it was going to be good!
WHOAZ...
Nice fullbody! Keep working on this, and you'll have complete animation diversity!
Cool!
Very smooth animation, but not as much fighting as I would have liked.
Awesome!
It was terrific! Although, for the style, I would have preferred you use your own custom gradients, and a black background with neon-colored lines like pale green, electric blue, pink, lavender, orange, etc. Also it would have been SUPREME-O-RADICAL if you had put in Soften Fill Edges on every line, but seeing as you had tons of frames to cover, that would have taken you hours of clicking. If you're unfamiliar with any of these terms, as you look like a beginner, Soften Fill Edges can be found by selecting a shape, going to Modify>Shape>Soften Fill Edges, and custom gradients can be made by going to the top right where it says Color, and selecting either Radial or Linear (preferably linear in this case), and clicking on the bar to create new references to different colors, then changing them. Hope it helped!
thanks, it will
Great!
Two things to change:
1) Increase the framerate. The animation was great, but slow.
2) Work a little bit on the last part where the guy gets stabbed.
I am not profi animator ...... sorry
Great Start
It's easy to see that this has major potential. It's a perfect prequel to B!
Unpredictable
Very witty and suspenseful... All the way through I was on the edge of my seat trying to figure out what was going to happen next!
Funny!
I wish my second submission had had an award! Funny, not too bad animation, and not too long. It's pretty good, and nobody can say you don't have potential *chuckles to self* By the way, what's that song?
LMAO!!
I especially liked how you compared the handicapped stall to an apartment, and the sink with the button where it's a "race against the water." The only thing I would suggest is putting in a scene select, as it is quite long.
Once upon a time, water taught itself how to feel pain.
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