I liked this a lot. I feel like there are a lot of songs that follow this pattern (Jon Lajoie, Mickey Avalon, PiGPEN) but I feel like you really got creative and produced quality work, which is really hard to do when there's already loads of this kind of stuff all over (ha).
I'm not sure if this track is short because you wrote a lot and cut it down or just because this was meant to be a quick project, but either way you did your thing and it was short enough that it didn't become too redundant. You also packed a fair share of multis and internals into the lyrics, though at times the slow tempo made the technical prowess a little less apparent (on the bright side, that gives this track a lot of replay value). The only thing that really let me down was a lack of punchlines, which goes a long way when you're already walking the beaten path. Complaining about an excessive penis length was unique and made for a good setup, but the ending to the track felt a little premature.
Smooth track. Liked the Dr. Scholl like a lot.