Kwing's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Jessica]

Decent

- Fingers are deformed. Accentuate the joints and make them more segmented.
- The cheekbone seems really high.
- The eyes are too high up.
- The lips need more shape.
- Put an awesome reflect effect in the necklace.

However I really liked the color scheme and the hair was very well done. Nice style.

[horo[spiceandwolf]]

Sick

The coloring especially is amazing. The way it's colored the entire mood is set perfectly and it just lines up with the art style and everything. Very harmonious and peaceful. The expression is also carried over perfectly and I love the background.

[horo]

Interesting

The head and hair are MASTERFUL, which are both very hard things to sketch out. The proportions and body position is very good, although either her legs seem really thick (less likely) or her arms seem really thin (more likely) because something seems a little off. Maybe it's just the perspective. I also don't get why the tuft of hair on the left is sticking up like that. Is it a tail? Why would it be sticking up like that? Is it hair from her head that's been starched? Is it (god forbid) pubic hair? One last thing I'd like to point out is that the toes on her left leg aren't very well defined. I understand the art style is 'rough', but they look almost deformed.

[FFVII-Left Behind]

Wow!

Lighting is awesome, I love where you chose to put the detail and where you chose to blur other parts of it... Everything about Cloud is spot-on. The sword stands out and looks really cool. Cloud's skin just looks kind of weird... Like you didn't know whether or not to make it more or less focused. Other than that really good.

[Don't F with Ri]

Rippin!

Awesome punk look to it, and the blood splatter is wicked awesome. Proportions are good, but perhaps something could have been done to give the hair some slight lighting or at least show separate strands or even individual fibers. Skin could have used lighting too but I can see you were going for a certain kind of style. Also i get her ear has piercings but I don't really get what the studs are on the left side of the ear. Also what's up with the X's on her arm? Last, needs a background. You could have taken a lot of liberty in making the background bring out the anger in it... It really would have rocked the picture.

[Every Light]

Wow

The fur is nice. Not top-notch, but very well done all the same. The skin is simply amazing, though. The pores are shown perfectly. The iris and pupil have really intricate detail and I really liked that too. However, the transition from the skin to fur didn't work well. Some kind of in between would have been pretty cool, but no dice. The left side of the eye also looked kind of animalistic, especially with how bloodshot it was and the way the eyelashes were. Making the left side of the eye more human and maybe actually showing whites on the right side of the eye would have really improved this. Who knows? Maybe this would look good with some crazy Yin Yang thing going on with the iris being half-human and half-beast.

Deadartcore responds:

Well Long Comment & i Appreciated Thanks im Glad u like it.

[Reflection]

Pretty Good

A few things bothered me, though. For one, the mirror translates kind of oddly. Mirrors are usually a lot less fogged, and while you may have been trying to illustrate that it was a reflection, the transparent white you glazed over it should be toned down a LOT. Next, the fingers aren't segmented as much as they should be. Accentuate the joints a little more. Third, the lighting on her arms was kind of abrupt. Perhaps a little bit more blur around the edges and it would have turned out better. Last I'd like to point out the face. Certain features seemed to be completely ignored. The indentation around the eyes was nonexistent, for one. The jaw and filtrum ridge also seemed to just have been forgotten. As a whole, the piece also seems to have some odd lighting. I think once again that's just the mirror throwing everything off because of the contrast. I still liked it though.

Deadartcore responds:

Oh yeah i know there's Several Minor issues, i Will try to improve on that thanks For your comment i appreciated alot thanks!

[Why So Serious?]

DAMN!

Pretty simple but the detail is there, the style works great, and there whole thing is just win! Two things I'd like to point out are that the handcuffs are really really long, and the red mark across the Joker's mouth doesn't show the actual scar. If there had been really thin lines across his mouth it would have worked great.

[Wonchop - Chilling]

Very Good!

The lighting on the clothes and hair are especially good, although the skin and feet look almost like fabric too. The way the legs are kind of almost-folded makes the whole thing lack perspective somewhat, and the feet are really weird looking. I think the whole thing would look better if the legs had been crossed. The gloves also look surrealistic and odd in comparison to the rest of it, and the red vest isn't visible through the transparency of the goggles while the undershirt is. Other than that I really, really liked it.

[Oney]

Funny

The style is done very well, and the translation looked pretty smooth. The only thing is that the cheeks look almost like pimples. Maybe you could try and make them a little more monochrome.