Kwing's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fun With Lines!!]

Awesome!

It was terrific! Although, for the style, I would have preferred you use your own custom gradients, and a black background with neon-colored lines like pale green, electric blue, pink, lavender, orange, etc. Also it would have been SUPREME-O-RADICAL if you had put in Soften Fill Edges on every line, but seeing as you had tons of frames to cover, that would have taken you hours of clicking. If you're unfamiliar with any of these terms, as you look like a beginner, Soften Fill Edges can be found by selecting a shape, going to Modify>Shape>Soften Fill Edges, and custom gradients can be made by going to the top right where it says Color, and selecting either Radial or Linear (preferably linear in this case), and clicking on the bar to create new references to different colors, then changing them. Hope it helped!

jamesb1995 responds:

thanks, it will

[Madness Day 2008 preview]

Great!

Two things to change:
1) Increase the framerate. The animation was great, but slow.
2) Work a little bit on the last part where the guy gets stabbed.

Lordorer responds:

I am not profi animator ...... sorry

[sss]

Great Start

It's easy to see that this has major potential. It's a perfect prequel to B!

[abcdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxy]

Unpredictable

Very witty and suspenseful... All the way through I was on the edge of my seat trying to figure out what was going to happen next!

[The Grenade Man]

Funny!

I wish my second submission had had an award! Funny, not too bad animation, and not too long. It's pretty good, and nobody can say you don't have potential *chuckles to self* By the way, what's that song?

[MSI - "Clarissa"]

YEAH!!

Great animation, interesting use of Pivot, some things were repeated to much, and a rough layout, but it's good. I like MSI, and I'm really happy that someone as famous as you (Henrik) has acknowledged the band.

[A Men's Room Monologue]

LMAO!!

I especially liked how you compared the handicapped stall to an apartment, and the sink with the button where it's a "race against the water." The only thing I would suggest is putting in a scene select, as it is quite long.

[My New Pivot Series]

It's a Good Preview

But the tag in the middle is annoying. If you want to change it, feel free to send me the files and I'll put them into Flash for you. I promise not to steal it, and you can quote me on that.

[Madness: Deus Ex Machina]

Incredible!!

The graphics are splendid, the animation is jerky, but not choppy, which really contributes more to the style than anything, and it's actually more of its own series than madness, seeing as many elements are changed! Incredible!

[Edible Castle #9]

LOL MOONFACE!!

Great! Actually, since these are so short, you could cram these all in to one Flash, excluding the 5 MB episode 10. Episodes 1-9 would only be 9.2 MB, and since you reuse the same graphics for all the episodes, and would only need one title entrance, the size would even be a little less, like 8-9 MB! The only drawback is that you couldn't get as many awards. But if I were you, I would submit a combination of 1-9 so people didn't have to individually view the other 9.